Design Principle - Task 3 DEVELOPMENT & DESIGN

 3/03/25 – / Week 5 – Week 7 

Yong Sun Lu 0376945

Design Principles / Bachelor of Design (Hons) in Creative Media 


Task 3 DEVELOPMENT & DESIGN

Recap: In this task we were asked to choose one of the ideas that we made from task 2 and bring it to life in this current task, developing it through color exploration, composition, typeface, and with design principles in mind.


Original (definitely the best and classic art)

Tittle Art work : Woman with a Parasol
Artist Name : Claude Monet (French, 1840 - 1926)
Size : overall: 100 x 81 cm (39 3/8 x 31 7/8 in.) 
       framed: 119.4 x 99.7 cm (47 x 39 1/4 in.)
Medium : Oil on canvas


The chosen idea




Revised Version (Based on the Teacher's feedback)

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Rationale

When I was thinking about how I am going to make this painting even more meaningful despite it’s already beautiful and meaningful causes me to a deep dilemma and stuck on that thought for days, there are some ideas that I came up with but it just won’t suit in with the art as it is already perfect itself. After some more time and some advices from my friends I decided to go with one of my idea which is to add some scattering dandelions and shaping them into a silhouette of a wing to the artist’s wife, this is to emphasize the angelic features that Madam Monet already have. Not only that I also changed the background from a shining afternoon into a calm and warm sunset to further emphasize the moment of the wife and child of the artist. Why didn’t I draw the faces? Well it is because of the background itself, since Madam Monet wore a some sort of veil and the child wore a hat so it will be natural if the artist could not see the face clearly as the shades covers the face. Such blissful and beautiful moment of a family of three.


Feedback

The teacher said that i should make the sketch on my own which basically means that i have to re-draw the whole painting as it was un-original and took out the meaning of the painting. The teacher was also very helpful and replied to my questions despite being on the weekend (Applause) 

Last week when i was consulting with the lecturer, he said that the gradation is good enough but the grey made it looked filthy and he said to change it into a graphic kind of color so, i changed it into pure sunset.

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